Semester Task: Essay
Considering the problems of humanity, one of the most
important is poverty. It resulted for many centuries and still has its place. The
problem of poverty is widespread throughout the world and lots of people suffer
from it. The world must unite and start to act quckily, finding possible solutions, so to reduce the effects of this critical issue.

First of all, there must be a job for everyone. It´s important to create jobs in poverty-stricken
regions. But, according
to statistics (https://bit.ly/2LvOrBB), there are 192 million of unemployed people in the world and to
get back to prerecession employment levels, there must be created up to 5.6
million new jobs. Although this is the most productive solution, all national governments should treat it properly. The way to achieve it is to rebuild abandoned houses, to make new technologies available to everyone, to develop
renewable energy sources, to raise minimum wage, etc.
Secondly, the social work must be both at federal and local level. Some sort of social organizations must be created to change the situation, directly helping those in need. Working with with all at once instead of a group of specific individuals has been proven to be more effective. On top of that, the proper healthcare must be given. Unpaid medical insurance lead to bankruptcy, so access to free or at least affordable healthcare will help to move the flow of money in a different direction.
And the last but the most significant thing is to allocate proper time and resources. By creating detailed plans and projects, allocating enough time, money and volunteer work, global poverty will begin to diminish.
All in all, global poverty is what every person should reckon with. It has proven to be tough and frustrating problem, but it can be demolished. These solutions to global poverty should be performed in struggling with it.
Secondly, the social work must be both at federal and local level. Some sort of social organizations must be created to change the situation, directly helping those in need. Working with with all at once instead of a group of specific individuals has been proven to be more effective. On top of that, the proper healthcare must be given. Unpaid medical insurance lead to bankruptcy, so access to free or at least affordable healthcare will help to move the flow of money in a different direction.
And the last but the most significant thing is to allocate proper time and resources. By creating detailed plans and projects, allocating enough time, money and volunteer work, global poverty will begin to diminish.
All in all, global poverty is what every person should reckon with. It has proven to be tough and frustrating problem, but it can be demolished. These solutions to global poverty should be performed in struggling with it.

The thesis statement cannot be a question; by definition it must be an affirmative sentence:
ReplyDeleteSource of statistics is not indicated
It existed (Gr: result) for many centuries and still manifests (Word Use: "to manifest" requires an object > in what?.
Roman,
Deleteyour essay is well-developed and well-organised. Overall, it's a rather good work but there is some room for improvement, which I mentioned above in my first comment